
There’s a reason why you couldn’t give birth alone
Do you think it’s natural to create a fatherless home?
There’s confusion why as a child you were lone
Do you think it’s common that fathers are gone?
There’s a bitter coldness in a manless syndrome
Do you think you could choose better and overcome?
There’s a lovingly caring father waiting at home
Do you think our daughter too shouldn’t have one?
There’s so much warm support to grow the gem
Do you think it’s threatening you to allow a ‘them’?
There’s a selfless duty of every daughter’s mom
Do you think it’s OK that you claim to be the only one?
There’s a chance that you’ll be forgiven some
Do you think you can live with the consequence to come?
There’s the father’s will to be his daughter’s sun
Do you think at least to tell her where this poem’s from?
Great one on Father and so much depth in your poem. Loved it.
Thanks a lot, Kamal!
Welcome mathias
A lot of pain in there!
Yeah, almost a bit too much to sound positive I guess. But sometimes it’s necessary. Thank you for your feedback, appreciate it!!
A nice and heart touching poem.
Thank you, nice to hear! All the best!
Sounds like a difficult and painful estrangement
The sound indeed reflects the feeling. Thank you for reading! All the best!
As a daughter of a mother who doesn’t understand my connection with my (1st-steph) father I can really feel the pain behind the words…
Beautifully done Mathias.
XxX
Thank you Patty. Yes, it’s so difficult to make us wholly understood to everybody. Just, where it impacts our life directly, we need to insist or in minimum have a valve to let the sorrow out …
All the best!
Touching!
Thank you very much!
Great poem! It is sad that so many fathers are not present in the lives of their children.
Dwight